love love love the artwork and story. You've clearly put a lot of care into this game and it really shows, I had a lot of fun going through the story loop and exploring all of the options! If you ever decide to go back in and add some sound effects or some music it could help to give it just a bit more ambience. My only critique is only a bit nit picky, but when you run out of hp nothing really seems to happen? If that was intentional that would be completely fine (given the narrative), but maybe adding an additional passage to incorporate that into the story or to add a sort of game over screen could give the hp more urgency or relevance. That's honestly the only note I have, i just adore the art and world you've created here (especially the creature), well done! :)
this is so CUTE. i love how stylised it is and the pixel art is beautiful. The gameplay loop of the end looping back into the beginning, and then being able to explore different options and have it make narrative sense at the same time is ingenious.
Love how immersive it is as well with the moving background, characters and props. practically no notes. Amazing work!
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love love love the artwork and story. You've clearly put a lot of care into this game and it really shows, I had a lot of fun going through the story loop and exploring all of the options! If you ever decide to go back in and add some sound effects or some music it could help to give it just a bit more ambience. My only critique is only a bit nit picky, but when you run out of hp nothing really seems to happen? If that was intentional that would be completely fine (given the narrative), but maybe adding an additional passage to incorporate that into the story or to add a sort of game over screen could give the hp more urgency or relevance. That's honestly the only note I have, i just adore the art and world you've created here (especially the creature), well done! :)
this is so CUTE. i love how stylised it is and the pixel art is beautiful. The gameplay loop of the end looping back into the beginning, and then being able to explore different options and have it make narrative sense at the same time is ingenious.
Love how immersive it is as well with the moving background, characters and props. practically no notes.
Amazing work!